So, I’ve finished. Kind of. As I was writing, I took some bits out so I now need to make some bridges between plots. But this is what I’ve got as my basis, and I’m pretty proud. I’m not quite sure about the ending yet, but overall I think it’s pretty disturbing, and that’s what I’m going for.
As with all of these, feedback is very welcome, always looking for improvements.
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Well done. I’m so proud of you! Keep up the great work.